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Post by Gando on May 3, 2011 19:35:28 GMT -5
This is the end text for the Aria quest at the Lake. I put the corrections in parentheses. Mostly this is a matter of missing articles/prepositions and plural vs singular conflicts as in prior cases.
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Post by Variaz on May 3, 2011 19:41:48 GMT -5
Thanks you very much, I've applied your corrections!
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Post by Gando on May 18, 2011 4:32:11 GMT -5
The Ghost Navarius:
Some corrections (spelling, syntax, and grammatical) and rewriting to make it more sensible.
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Post by Gando on Jun 8, 2011 19:09:13 GMT -5
This dialogue could use some editing for sentence structure but it is good enough as is.
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