Corrections in Text (**SPOILERS**)

[Gando]

A glowing column of light surrounds Aria, as she fly(flies) up in (to) the sky and disappear(disappears) in a blinding flash of light. She has returned to (the) Heavens, thanks to your skill and bravery. Still, you can't help but wonder why did (the) Heavens, who represents (represent) goodness, sent (send) a child on such a dangerous mission. You are happy that Aria returned home, but somehow you are worried about her safety. You have a feeling that you might meet her again someday...

This is the end text for the Aria quest at the Lake. I put the corrections in parentheses. Mostly this is a matter of missing articles/prepositions and plural vs singular conflicts as in prior cases.

[Variaz]

Thanks you very much, I've applied your corrections!

[Gando]

The Ghost Navarius:

As a Zulgor, he is unbelievably strong. He also has great control over the normally unpredictable forces of chaos. However, this Zulgor has mastery of chaos far beyond what is normal for his race. Using his powers he is able to alter reality. He can make it so that things that exist cease to exist. He can change the shapes of things. He can even bring into existence things that should not exist. He has the power to make possible that which would normally be impossible and thus defy the laws of physics and reality.

Some corrections (spelling, syntax, and grammatical) and rewriting to make it more sensible.

[Gando]

So...you are the one who infiltrated my caves, and killed several of my dark minions. I do not appreciate, Rogue, definitly not. So you know what I will do? I will kill you as an undead minion under my own control. My ladies! Let us kill this foolish Rogue!!

So...you are the one who infiltrated my caves, and killed several of my dark minions. I do not appreciate it, Rogue, definitely not. So you know what I will do? I will kill you as an undead minion under my own control. My ladies! Let us kill this foolish Rogue!!

This dialogue could use some editing for sentence structure but it is good enough as is.